Muhammed Senussi
Muhammed Senussi
  • Muhammed Senussi
The Hakawati Invented the Cliffhanger
Storytelling

Long before serialised television, the hakawati was working out the same problem: how do you make people come back?

The setting

He sat on a raised chair in a coffeehouse, with a book he mostly did not read from, telling episodes of Sirat Antar or the Sirat Bani Hilal — vast cycles that could run for months. The audience knew the stories. They came for the telling, and for the argument afterwards about whether tonight’s version was right.

The audience knowing the ending does not reduce the suspense. It changes what the suspense is about.

What he understood

  • Stop at the moment of decision, not the moment of surprise. Suspense is about what someone will choose, and a room will argue about a choice all night.
  • The room is a participant. He would slow down when they leaned in and cut a passage short when they did not.
  • Repetition is a service. Newcomers needed the recap, and the regulars enjoyed hearing the familiar formula again — the same reason a chorus works.

The form has almost disappeared, and the techniques did not. Every serialised drama you have watched is running his playbook.

4 Comments

  • Yara Mansour

    February 20, 2024

    جدّي كان يأخذني إلى مقهى فيه حكواتي في الثمانينيات. لم أفكّر يوماً في التوقّف عند القرار لا المفاجأة، لكنه بالضبط ما كان يفعله.

    • Muhammed Senussi

      Muhammed Senussi

      AuthorFebruary 20, 2024

      هذه ذاكرة ثمينة. أظن أن السبب أن المفاجأة تنتهي بمجرّد كشفها، أما القرار فيبقى مفتوحاً في رأس السامع طوال اليوم التالي، وهو ما يعيده إلى المقهى.

  • Peter Bakker

    February 23, 2024

    The point about the audience already knowing the ending is fascinating. It is the same with Greek tragedy.

    • Muhammed Senussi

      Muhammed Senussi

      AuthorFebruary 23, 2024

      Exactly the same, and I think for the same reason. When you cannot be surprised by what happens, you attend to how and why instead, which is usually the more interesting half anyway.

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